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terms/privacy_policy.md

@@ -4,8 +4,10 @@ Effective date: March 1, 2020
 
 Federated Networks Association ("us", "we", or "our") operates the feneas.org
 website including all services associated with the Domain name (the "Service").
-We also have a membership program (the "Membership" or "Member"). Our policies 
-towards your  data and your rights are also covered by this privacy policy. When we talk 
+We additionally operate the wedistribute.org and joindiaspora.com websites
+(also part of the "Service"). Additionally we also have a membership 
+program (the "Membership" or "Member"). Our policies towards your data and 
+your rights are also covered by this privacy policy. When we talk 
 about "Service" or "Membership" in this page, those terms should be thought as the same.
 
 This page informs you of our policies regarding the collection, use,
@@ -30,9 +32,9 @@ those differences guided by our policy.
 
 ### Right to Erasure
 
-You can request that we delete your copy of message and files by instructing us
-to deactivate your accounts on our Service or Membership. You can do this by 
-contacting us via email to [privacy@feneas.org](mailto:privacy@feneas.org).
+You can request that we delete our copy of your messages, files and other data
+by instructing us to deactivate your accounts on our Service or Membership.
+You can do this by contacting us via email to [privacy@feneas.org](mailto:privacy@feneas.org).
 
 ### Data Portability
 
@@ -77,7 +79,7 @@ Personally identifiable information may include, but is not limited to:
 * Email address
 * Full name
 * City and Country
-* Cookies and Usage Data
+* Cookies and Usage Data (for example IP address)
 * Profile picture
 
 #### Created Content
@@ -149,10 +151,12 @@ Your consent to this Privacy Policy followed by your submission of such informat
 represents your agreement to that transfer.
 
 Federated Networks Association will take all steps reasonably necessary to ensure
-that your data is treated securely and in accordance with this Privacy Policy
-and no transfer of your Personal Data will take place to an organization or
-a country unless there are adequate controls in place including the security
-of your data and other personal information.
+that your data is treated securely and in accordance with this Privacy Policy, when
+stored in locations controlled by us. Federated Data is often transferred to locations
+outside our control, meaning that we cannot ensure the storage of the data is secure
+or according to this privacy policy.
+
+Membership data is never shared as Federated Data and is always stored securely.
 
 #### Federated data